The intersection between AI and Police.

It seems to me that the route to improvement is a clearer point of your own. "Artificial intelligence" here is really a synonym for "software." Your point is that when software is the most important constituent of society, rather than petrochemicals or steel, policing is also different because all of society is different. The evaluations we apply to policing (accuracy, fairness, avoidance of unnecessary intrusion or use of force, effectiveness at maintaining public security and order) will be affected by the transformations policing goes through, and the changes in societal values that will also happen.

All this is basic. The current draft uses many more words to say as much. Now we want a specific relevant idea of your own, which you can describe, analytically evaluate, and enable the reader to put to her own use. You have much room to reduce the introductory material. Levels of technical description are only necessary where the specifics rather than the general importance of software and data analytics are directly involved.