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A Suggestion for Regrading our Grades

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 Unfortunately, the ‘meat grinder’ mentality of employers, specifically law firms, must be taken into account by the Dean. The bottom line is that big law firms are the initial employer of a significant number of CLS grads, and as the head of a professional school, it is part of the Dean’s job to maximize students’ professional prospects. Alternatively, one could argue that in the long run, students would be better off if such a hiring system were not used; hence, switching to a different grading methodology could be more beneficial if it eventually influenced the overall system.

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I think the benefits of using a tiered grading system are such that we must maintain it in some fashion; however, I think it would be worth it to take the potential short term hit on employment prospects by using a modified pass/fail system, in order to obtain the benefits that using such a system would yield. I would propose going to a scale that evaluates grades on three levels of passing, in addition to the somewhat mythical failing grade. First and foremost, this type of system would likely reduce stress among students, as minor distinctions in grades would not have quite as big of an impact. Certainly the counter argument to this is that it would reduce effort somewhat, an idea which was broached by Dean Schizer. He also specified that, in meeting with certain groups of students, they felt that such a system would not properly reward those who did exceptionally well in a course. This is perhaps true, although since he asked a group of students on the Law Review, their answers might not be reflective of overall student opinion. Still, their point has some validity, in that more students would be lumped together in the middle of a curve. But this lack of differentiation would be ameliorated overall by a more congenial atmosphere among students, leading to a more productive learning environment.

This type of scale would also fix a byproduct of the grading system, which is that professors must allocate specific grades to students in a course largely based on exam results which are, for the most part, incredibly similar. This leads to artificial mechanisms for evaluating students, which places significant emphasis on merely meeting a rubric that the professor must create. Furthermore, because of the curve, such minor differentiations can lead to dramatically different results for students whose exams are fairly similar. Ideally, grading would be more individualized, and hence able to fit within the current scheme. However, because most classes are based on an anonymous exam, it seems unfair to force such a practice to lead to such a specific result. This is not to damn differentiation; the system I propose would give similar results as to what we currently get. However, I believe it would functionally make student life better, while simultaneously forcing employers who want to superficially evaluate students to dig a little deeper. If the administration truly has confidence in our students, then they should welcome a holistic evaluation of CLS graduates. A moderated system wouldn’t go as far as some may like, but it would balance out competing interests, while establishing some progress away from the mechanical evaluations that are currently the norm. Eventually, a complete reformation of student evaluations is desirable; given the current state of the legal world, this might be imminent. The pragmatist in me though says that the time for this is not yet here.

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On the grade reform debate

By AaronShepard - 04 Mar 2009

Throughout this class, one of the things I have enjoyed the most is conceptualizing how the various authors we have read would react to some present situations. I am writing this paper based on my related thoughts on the grade debate. How do you frame this issue in an overall context? Does it invoke the Holmesian ‘bad man’, where rationalization subverts the ineffective language of morality? Would Arnold merely say that grades are there to help us consciously maintain control of something that would otherwise get out of hand? How do the various options and rationalizations reflect societal values?

  • This is not a good beginning to an essay, because it's sterile. You want to begin with a proposition that engages the reader's attention. Talking about why you like hearing the sound of your own voice on the current subject is anything but.

Differentiation

The most cited reason for maintaining the current system in favor of one more geared towards a pass/fail regime is that there would be a lack of differentiation between students in the latter schema.

  • That would be "among students." And why do you need the pompous but unhelpful "in the latter schema" at all? It adds nothing but weight.

Employers have been extremely pro-maintaining the current system,

  • Why do you need a horrendous construction like that? How about "Employers strongly support the current system, according to the dean."? That says everything in fewer words that don't break rules against mistreatment of the reader's grammar.

according to Dean Schizer at a recent town hall debate. Having grades allows them to sort through applicants, and discard those who fail to meet a certain threshold. While employers might end up getting rid of terrific applicants who, for whatever reason, don’t have terrific grades, this is potentially necessary when rifling through numerous applicants for (rapidly decreasing) job slots.

  • Bullshit. The fewer the lawyers you need and the more you know about why you need them the less purpose is served by "differentiation" on the transcript. I hire lawyers every season, and I am almost entirely unconcerned with their grades. I know what skills I need them to have, and I can winnow the CVs for myself on that basis, then test on those skills directly through the interviewing process. It's when you're hiring a commodity in bulk that you need bulk rating attributes. But it is not in the student's interest to be hired as bulk labor, so whether that type of employer prefers commodity standards (like "Prime" and "Choice") when buying its meat is of no concern to you.

What exactly do grades demonstrate though? Clearly they have an Arnold-esque aspect of controlling and sorting our organization, but do they reflect anything of substance? One of the typical responses to those who seek to keep the current system is that nowhere in the real world is one required to write about never-before-seen questions in a 3 hour time slot, without access to the gentle embrace of Westlaw or LexisNexis? Furthermore, what if one were having a bad day, or simply doesn’t perform well in an exam format? Does that mean anything?

  • Now you are asking whether exams are a good form of evaluation, not whether grades are a good way of reporting the results of evaluation. The confusion should be cleared up, because no reader will miss it, and you discredit what you have to say by apparently thinking in a muddled manner.

My thoughts in response to this issue are that grades are but a limited tool to evaluate a student.

  • Then your thoughts are a resounding truism. Nothing less jejune to offer at this point is a sign of real trouble.

Certainly, there will be a correlation between the relative abilities of students and their grades';

  • Being gender-neutral is a good goal. But nothing requires you to destroy English grammar in order to achieve it. Don't EVER make an agreement mistake, which looks illiterate, in order to achieve a general social purpose.

however, I suspect that that correlation isn’t all that strong.

  • You want us to accept your suspicion as some form of evidence in support of an argument?

Furthermore, how do you define the necessary abilities when it comes to a specific job? I would additionally suspect that a very high percentage of Columbia Law School grads have the intellectual ability to succeed at job X, especially if that job is at a typical firm.

  • Your suspicion here is even more ludicrous than your suspicion above. I can tell you what skills and qualities I want in each individual lawyer I hire, as well as the general intellectual and social requirements for successful incorporation in our existing team. Once again, you are confusing the question of how to select a lawyer with the problem of how to hire commodity laborers in a sweatshop.

When it comes to who would be the most successful at that position though, I would think that several facets of the individual student would be more correlated to success than merely his ability to successful complete a three hour exam. An anti-social, intellectually circumscribed student might be excellent at regurgitating information for three hours, but one could guess that he would be less successful working in a populated office.

  • This again confuses the issue of how to evaluate with how to report the results of evaluation. You can't succeed in your analysis if these are constantly conflated.

The overall summation of my thoughts on this issue are that grades play too large of a role, and that while employers may like the increased differentiation, everyone (including them) would be better off by focusing on the intangibles of an applicant (such as the interview, relevant experience, etc.).

  • So this "overall summation of [your] thoughts on this issue" is again the pompous presentation of a truism.

Obviously at some level employers do this, and the academic successes of a student are more important in some professional fields than in others. But in most, it would seem that there are many more important and applicable standards by which to judge, and perhaps everyone would be better off by focusing more attention on those, rather than purely on grades.

  • But this confuses how hiring staff in law firms should work with how teachers should report the evaluation of their students. Unless we have somehow resolved the intermediate question in favor of the conclusion that education is primarily carried on for the benefit of purchasers of canned skilled meat. You didn't show how you reached that intermediate conclusion, probably because you didn't really think about it.

Student Effort

A related aspect to differentiation is the result the lack of it would have on student effort.

  • This should have been written in English rather than Bureaucrat. How about "It is often suggested that students will work less hard if not threatened by bad grades."?

This would be clearly apparent in a pure pass/fail system, especially if the fail option maintained its somewhat mythical status.

  • It wouldn't be apparent unless one accepted the premises, in which case I suppose it would be apparent elsewhere too.

If everyone passes, the theory goes, no one works hard. However, while this may be true in a system on the extreme end of the spectrum, would it still be true in a modified pass/fail system, such as one that was purportedly proposed here in response to the ones instituted at Harvard, Stanford, and Yale?

  • Huh?

I tend to think not.

  • "Tend to think" is like "suspect." You cannot persuade us on the basis of your thinking's tendency.

Virtually all of us at are law school because we want to be,

  • What does "virtually" mean? Usually it means "not really."

and because we have at least some interest in learning about the legal system. Unlike my required Biology 101 class in undergrad, the things that I am learning here I not only find interesting, but also know that they will be helpful professionally. Understandably, I think most students would prefer to not have to work so hard; I don’t know many people who read 50 pages of property law concerning defeasible torts with vigor (although I actually very much like my current property class). Still, this is a far cry from saying that if the grading system were reformed, people would ‘go into the tank’.

  • What is the argument of the previous graf? And did you mean "defeasible fees" rather than "defeasible torts"?

Incentives

A professor brought up in the town hall meeting that if classes were made pass/fail, students would have little incentive to come to class and participate. However, even now, classes aren’t exactly a bastion of free expression and participation. I’m fairly certain I can predict with reasonable accuracy before any given class just who will speak, for how long, and whether they will actually ask a question or merely express their elongated opinion. Professors can encourage participation of course, but for the many reasons we discussed in this class earlier, students are frequently loath to do it. Hence, it does not seem to me that changing the grading system would shift opportunity cost all that much.

  • Confusion on confusion. If work were unevaluated, would people have reduced incentives to perform it? Perhaps. But whether to evaluate is a different question than whether to report the results of evaluation through letter grades.

Conclusion

In general, there are other aspects to consider here.

  • That's a CONCLUSION?

Would changing the grade curve reduce stress, and increase communal willingness to work together? Would students become more adventurous in their class selection? I tend to think that both of those questions should be answered in the affirmative. Still, as a professional school, Columbia has to respond to what would be best in preparing students for the professional world. In this sense, some differentiation is still required, to perhaps at least meet the managing aspects that Arnold discusses.

 
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  • No conclusion at all. And a last sentence that throws some Arnold back in, for no reason other than to vindicate the first paragraph's claim that all of this was supposed to hook up to the reading through your imaginative reapplication of Arnold and Holmes. But you did no such thing, and probably shouldn't have been trying. It would have been enough to write a clear and well-focused argument about grades. That you can achieve in a second draft, which will be quite different from this one, I suspect.
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I think the benefits of using a tiered grading system are such that we must maintain it in some fashion; however, I think it would be worth it to take the potential short term hit on employment prospects by using a modified pass/fail system, in order to obtain the benefits that using such a system would yield. I would propose going to a scale that evaluates grades on three levels of passing, in addition to the somewhat mythical failing grade. First and foremost, this type of system would likely reduce stress among students, as minor distinctions in grades would not have quite as big of an impact. Certainly the counter argument to this is that it would reduce effort somewhat, an idea which was broached by Dean Schizer. He also specified that, in meeting with certain groups of students, they felt that such a system would not properly reward those who did exceptionally well in a course. This is perhaps true, although since he asked a group of students on the Law Review, their answers might not be reflective of overall student opinion. Still, their point has some validity, in that more students would be lumped together in the middle of a curve. But this lack of differentiation would be ameliorated overall by a more congenial atmosphere among students, leading to a more productive learning environment.

  • Your editing is still not catching places where you depart from standard English grammar and usage. You need to be more diligent about language editing. Without more effort you're not going to make all the improvement needed.

This type of scale would also fix a byproduct of the grading system, which is that professors must allocate specific grades to students in a course largely based on exam results which are, for the most part, incredibly similar.

  • There's nothing incredible about the similarity of cookie-cutter responses to examinations that call for them. You shouldn't use "incredible" to mean "very," and you shouldn't use "very" unless you need to add one more word to a sentence that hasn't got enough padding in it. That most examinations are badly engineered and don't spread the class sufficiently is only one of the many things wrong with examinations as a system of educational evaluation, but here, as in the prior draft, you have a tendency to confuse analysis of grades with analysis of evaluation mechanisms.

This leads to artificial mechanisms for evaluating students, which places significant emphasis on merely meeting a rubric that the professor must create. Furthermore, because of the curve, such minor differentiations can lead to dramatically different results for students whose exams are fairly similar. Ideally, grading would be more individualized, and hence able to fit within the current scheme. However, because most classes are based on an anonymous exam, it seems unfair to force such a practice to lead to such a specific result. This is not to damn differentiation; the system I propose would give similar results as to what we currently get. However, I believe it would functionally make student life better, while simultaneously forcing employers who want to superficially evaluate students to dig a little deeper. If the administration truly has confidence in our students, then they should welcome a holistic evaluation of CLS graduates. A moderated system wouldn’t go as far as some may like, but it would balance out competing interests, while establishing some progress away from the mechanical evaluations that are currently the norm. Eventually, a complete reformation of student evaluations is desirable; given the current state of the legal world, this might be imminent. The pragmatist in me though says that the time for this is not yet here.

  • It's not clear who the pragmatist in you is, unless the word means "too cautious to say out loud that the dean is being a fool." This draft is substantially better in every way than your first draft, and is therefore a success on all three measures of effort, commitment, and improvement. But I'm not sure what pragmatism means to you. To me, it means a philosophical insistence on the measurement of truth not by logic or any formal thought process (for example, a lot of woozy vaporing about "incentives" and "rewards") but by actual results derived from experiments in the world (such as testing whether law students can be helped to improve their written advocacy skills by making them write short essays on subjects that engage them, with further reliance on collaborative discussion and tough editing by the instructor to isolate their weaknesses and help them to work on improvement where they need to improve). On that basis, it doesn't seem to me to be pragmatic to go on ignoring indefinitely the apparent problems with a system of action, on the supposition that people who are external to the community, and who are rapidly losing influence because they no longer possess the economic clout they used to throw around, might supposedly object. I think it would be pragmatic to call that nonsense.

  • So, sharing your liking for pragmatism, I have. My essay, which is a little longer than yours is allowed to be, can be found at EvaluationPolicy.
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