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DanielChungFirstPaper 7 - 19 Jun 2012 - Main.EbenMoglen
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Happily ever after only happens in fairy tales. Just before the NBA playoffs, Lin discovered that he would need surgery to repair a torn meniscus in his left knee. Linsanity had already died down over the past few months, and now, Lin would have to miss several important weeks of basketball for surgery and recovery. Right after a successful surgery, Lin tweeted “Praise God for a successful surgery” and answered questions about his faith from Facebook fans. Throughout his career, Lin has been eager to discuss and proclaim his Christian faith, which he claims is a central part of his life and career. Some have even compared him to Tim Tebow for his very public faith. At Harvard, he led Bible studies, and he has continually expressed an interest in attending seminary in the future and pastoring in inner-city communities. As Lin explains, he wants to “trust God more…surrender more…[and] bring him more glory.” Lin’s ability to incorporate his faith into his career is inspiring. He teaches me that my career does not have to consume my life and that it can be a powerful means to a greater end. I should have the courage to integrate all aspects of my life—including my faith—into my career. Lin’s desire to become both a basketball player and a pastor challenges me to reimagine my career and not pigeonhole myself as a specific type of lawyer. Finally, Lin’s grace under repeated pressure reminds me that I need courage that will sustain me against the vicissitudes of life. With such courage, I know that I will be able to endure and to build a meaningful career.
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So a system for marketing sports celebrity gossip marketed you a guy
called Lin, who won some games until he got hurt. First you wrote a
bunch of stuff using words made out of his name. Now you've attached
every bromide and truism about careerism (courage, perseverence,
Godliness, cleanliness too for all I know) to some basketball
metaphor or other, using this gentlemen's few weeks of athletic
prominence as an allegory. Surely I don't have to point out again
that an extended metaphor isn't an idea.
It's true that I dislike having an advertisement pushed at me as a
facsimile of an idea. But the weakness of this draft isn't that you
can't seem to give up on the packaging: it's that the idea inside all
the packaging is just platitudes.
Try making one draft without the Wheaties box ambience. Leave this
basketball player out and write out the idea another way. Then we
can make the intellectual payload as good as it could be, and if you
want to wrap it back up in Sports Illustrated marketing pap, at
least we'll know the product inside the wrapper has some value.
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