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 Again, sorry if this is not a good forum. Reading this, it felt to me like daddy just hit mommy at the dinner table and even though I want to sit quietly and eat my peas, maybe it's better to articulate how Eben and Theo's exchange can help us learn to write more strongly in the future.

-- MolissaFarber - 03 Mar 2009

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Theo's mistake was glaring; however, I don't understand why he deserves negative improvement scores. Though marred, he offered a possible solution which I'm sure took considerable time to write. Perhaps it would have been better to point out his errors and then ask him and the class at large whether this is an idea we can build on or an idea we should abandon.

-- JonathanGuerra - 04 Mar 2009

 
 
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