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  Theo's mistake was glaring; however, I don't understand why he deserves negative improvement scores. Though marred, he offered a possible solution which I'm sure took considerable time to write. Perhaps it would have been better to point out his errors and then ask him and the class at large whether this is an idea we can build on or an idea we should abandon.

-- JonathanGuerra - 04 Mar 2009

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"Perhaps it would have been better to point out his errors and then ask him and the class at large whether this is an idea we can build on or an idea we should abandon."

Maybe I'm misreading you, but this seems to be more of a suggestion to Professor Moglen. As far as actions within our own control (disregarding, for the moment, the extent to which we can make things happen in class using our words) how we as students can improve our writing from this discussion? I'm sure the lesson here is not "write about small topics and avoid taking on something that you cannot completely defend," since that seems like a too-easy solution. Still, that's ultimately the lesson that keeps coming into my head when I think about this.

-- MolissaFarber - 05 Mar 2009

 
 
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