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Using Law and Social Control to Improve Islam's Image in America | | Of course, there is the point to be made that Muslims make up only a small portion of the United States population, and therefore, this approach is limited in its scope. While this is true, we aren't limited to merely using personal connections as a form of social control. We can also use popular culture. The likes of Muhammed Ali, Fareed Zakaria, and Lupe Fiasco have certainly humanized Islam for many. An attitude that embraces, rather than blindly rejects, American culture will increase the likelihood that more American Muslims grow up to become highly successful in a number of fields. | |
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*then go with D.Black comparison, inverse law, social control*
**the title should be changed, you need a central idea
--now i think i have that, this is how a combination of law (government social control) and other social control can improve the image of Islam in America
**use this section to explain how other forms of social control are more powerful than law.
**general comment: what's my point? the combination of law (government social control, according to D.Black) AND other forms of social control (like social interaction, friendship, etc.) would benefit American Muslims. So this is about combining short term benefits that the law may be able to provide (lawsuits for immediate relief, community organizing, etc.), and long-term effects that can be derived from basic social interaction in communities, is a way to maximize the level of social control for one particular group in America (American Muslims). Expand on D.Black's proposition that law and other social control are inversely related. Perhaps this not simply a temporal argument (short term and long term), maybe it's that if we (American Muslims) ratchet up other forms of social control, we would have less litigation!
I don't know how you
come to the historical conclusion that you come to. You don't show
us: you merely tell the story leaving out the parts that might have
resulted in a different conclusion. A summary of the history of the
civil rights struggle that leaves out the Thirteenth, Fourteenth and
Fifteenth Amendments, the 1876 election, the Civil Rights Cases,
Plessy, Charles Hamilton Houston, Thurgood Marshall, the Second
World War, Brown, Rosa Parks, Martin King, the Voting Rights Act,
the Watts riots, Richard Nixon's "Southern Strategy," and so on and
so on is probably not going to be complete enough to judge from.
White supremacy in America from about 1650 about 1968 was supported
by de jure racial segregation. That makes the role of the law in
maintaining and then weakening its grip a different question than the
general one of whether law is a weak form of social control or (more
pertinently) whether legal remedies are generally useful in abating
social tensions across ethnic, class or religious divisions.
First Amendment Protections and Behavior
**use this section to outline the overarching challenges Muslims face (irrational suspicion, anti-Sharia legislation, Spencer/Geller/Gaffney type group, mosque protests)
I don't think the
measurement of "severity," is the most useful one. Social situations
have historical and psychological contexts, as well as sociological
and legal ones. What is happening to Muslims in the US is tied more
deeply to what has happened, is happening and internally tends to
happen within Christian and Islamic societies and people than to what
has happened or is happening or internally tends to happen between
black and white people in the Unites State.
He was accused of both.
The opposing candidate publicly rejected efforts by voters to
describe Obama as a Muslim in his hearing. But he made no effort to
stop his running mate from repeatedly saying that Obama "palled
around with terrorists." I'm not sure why this matters, but if it
does we should be accurate about it.
We could find many more
examples of this form of criminal violence directed against Muslims,
qua Muslims. But burnings and other criminal desecrations of
churches and synagogues also occur in the US, every year. And,
unfortunately, there are very few ways, in a large, highly-armed and
rather violent society to determine the social meaning of isolated
acts of murder. So interpreting these facts as presented is not a
particularly promising line of persuasion for any
proposition.
**change this section to explain how this is a short term strategy, it is to be "that" AND "this." Law can be a good form of attaining short term goals (if one has the resources and ability to use the judicial process).
This would make sense as
a strategy in the event of the passage of state laws that impeded
Muslim freedom of worship or religious practice for non-secular
reasons. But it isn't the legal response appropriate to mosque
burnings or hate crimes. I think you're probably imprecisely
characterizing the precise legal positions taken and actions brought
in the specific situations described. That will confuse a reader
with some legal knowledge but no specific knowledge about these
matters.
**this needs to be an "American exceptionalism" argument. An American Muslim is not the same as a Syrian Muslim, Saudi Muslim, or Eyptian one. There is something about the way American society works that makes what I am saying better suited for American Muslims, than any other type of Muslim. Think about what those unique qualities are. Then write them down here.
Is this actually the
historical and social lesson concerning the treatment of Muslims
living in non-Islamic society? Is it how Indian society works? How
Yugoslavia worked? How Russians and Caucasian Muslims or Turks and
Greeks have interacted over centuries? Or is this a point about
American society that draws an exception from the usual condition of
Muslims in the Dar al-Harb?
Which is all of us.
Because our rational processes are the secondary rather than primary
forces in our minds. Secular people who have absorbed the ideas we
call "Freud" know this. But the very idea of submission to the law
of an external all-powerful God is another recognition of the same
proposition, whether the God so described exists or not. No accurate
psychology, religious or secular, would lead us to expect secondary
processes to be all we need to concern ourselves with on such an
inquiry, or to affect such a change in society as your description
implies.
Social control succeeds by appealing to the non-rational, unconscious
motives of the human animal. Law is weak because it does so weakly.
The creation of fear of Muslims in American society was deliberate,
careful, rational and purposive, intended to manipulate people to
create irresistible power. It is slowly and intentionally turning
the US from a free society into a technologically-enabled despotism.
But it was also an unconscious process, spreading outward from hidden
roots in an increasingly ill-educated Christian society losing its
faith.
Utility of the Law as a Form of Social Control
If law is not a powerful form of social control, than why do we spend so much time and energy drafting penal codes, writing legislation, and interpreting the Constitution? Wouldn’t we be better off using some other form social control?
Not if the weakness of
the form of control is part of its utility and
importance.
Is the reason we don’t murder children or use crystal meth because of laws the tell us not to? If not, then why have laws at all? Some would probably say that the reason we have laws is for the few people that do engage in activities like murder and drug use. Deterrence is often argued, yet many felons, for example, are repeat offenders. A report from the Bureau of Justice statistics found that 61% of felony defendants had at least one prior conviction.
So it would make sense
to ask the same question without limiting yourself to a view of human
psychology that ignores everything below the
surface.
While laws don’t appear to be a strong form of social control (in that it is unclear whether laws actually prevent crimes from being committed) it may have some utility. If one has the resources, short term relief can be granted. An injunction or a court order will meet an objective in the short term. But it must be met with other forms of social control. With a Muslim woman who wears a hijab (headscarf), for example, winning an employment discrimination lawsuit will help the individual who was discriminated against. But does it actually change the perceptions the employer has of Muslims? Social pressures (a friend who is Muslim, a neighbor who is Muslim) are likely to result in more lasting change.
This last point, I
recognize, is for you—in the world of present
politics—the reason all the rest of the analysis has been
written. Because politics is about appealing to non-rational
elements in the human mind, this is—as we have discussed
before—an approach that it makes sense for you to take. But
considered as a form of rational argument, as you present it here,
it's completely unestablished. Events in Toulouse over the past
several weeks, and their effects on French society at large, would
give a different turn to the analysis. And the much more serious and
complex laboratory constructed in India over the last
quarter-millennium would yield different, more uncertain, more
appalling and more fascinating propositions. Once again, it makes a
good deal of difference whether this is an argument based on another
form of "American exceptionalism," or a general social claim. | > > | This is a successful rewrite. It required substantial effort, but
you now have a clear, coherent, balanced, useful statement of your
position in 992 words. You could make it tighter, bringing it down
to 750 words by careful editing, which would be something useful as a
newspaper Op-Ed. But you have made your point, and it's a valuable
exercise whatever you do with it.
Substantively, I think you've crafted your pitch much more
effectively than at the outset. I think you've explained why this
isn't hostile to existing approaches, I think you've explained why it
isn't some sort of objectionable "assimilationism," and I think
therefore you have made your approach both a real instrument in
coalition building, and a shield against certain forms of extremist
rhetoric. You show a few too many figure lines, with your comments
on how social control works. Those are meant to prove you know what
you're doing, but in this form of lawyering, showing you know what
you're doing can interfere with getting it done. | |
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