Law in Contemporary Society

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 [I would like to sum Nona's and Devin's comments, which helped me as I edited the piece to increase clarity. Both were concerned with the meaning of the term "empty" and how we can utilise our understanding of it in practical terms. Nona expressed confusion over whether the "Dharma metaphor [should be applied] to a SCOTUS decision" and how the notion of fading away should be understood. Devin wanted a more detailed explanation of Buddhist philosophy but I found this difficult to achieve within our word limit -- briefing a concept would be misstatement on my part.]
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I think the connection between the discussion of constitutional interpretation and the rest of the essay is obscure. If it needs to be part of the essay for the essay to attain its objective, something should be said to show why. If it is not necessary, I believe it's a distraction.

The remainder of the essay has the inevitable internal contradiction that it sounds like advice. Something to guard against putting readers into a defensive posture by seeming to tell them from a position of superior sanctity how to live would be helpful in the first grafs. A word or two about ego might be appropriate; it's not a negative word in our lexicon.

 
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