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MollyMartinezFirstEssay 4 - 18 May 2023 - Main.EbenMoglen
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< | It is strongly recommended that you include your outline in the body of your essay by using the outline as section titles. The headings below are there to remind you how section and subsection titles are formatted. | | | My Personal Disillusionment | | | As my hopes for individualized practice hinge upon the desire to represent creatives in their negotiations with various business entities in the pursuit of the production and distribution of their art form, I hope to occupy the characteristics of a collaborator. My own practice will focus on making the necessary connections between the various actors involved in the entertainment industry while still keeping an eye on the needs of my smaller client. The collaborator should listen and adapt accordingly to best serve the group’s interest. Even as I serve others, I will continue thinking of how I may collaborate with others in my field.
As I approach my career with authenticity, I plan to build out a more extensive network of colleagues I work with. This network will allow me to build up opportunities for both sides of mentorship. | |
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The progress you made in the last paragraph shows why I suggested that you start the draft there. The past is where the first draft came from. The future is where the second raft should have been and the third draft can be.
Naturally 150 words didn't give you enough space to address What, Where, With Whom, or How Much; Why is assumed to be knowable from your past and your "disillusionment." "Making the necessary connections between the various actors involved in the entertainment industry while still keeping an eye on the needs of my smaller client" is not What, because it does not contribute to your program of study. What your practice is supposed to do is What you need to learn in law school, To know what to put it your license, it helps to know what you need. "Plan[ning] to build a network" is absolutely right, but we need to know Who we need to meet in order to use the clout of the law school to meet them.
So let's use a draft to get specific. What will your practice do? Where will you live and work? Who do you need to know in order to find clients, and provide services? How will your practice meet its and your economic requirements?
Yes, your answers will be uncertain, early and wrong. But they will help you to understand what you need to learn in order to do what you want. Which is what law school ought to do for you, and absolutely will not do unless you make it.
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