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>		Can you sum up the point / thesis of this essay in one or two sentences? Honestly, I think the suffocating recantation of Arnold, the use of multiple (dubiously helpful) metaphors, and the multiple quotations obscures and detracts from the point of your essay. (Note: I am often guilty of this myself).

I also think your description of Holmes' betabilitarian is off the mark by a considerable margin.

-- MatthewZorn - 28 Mar 2010

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