Law in Contemporary Society

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TaleahTyrellSecondEssay 3 - 02 May 2021 - Main.EbenMoglen
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Taleah, this is more than 1400 words, which is 40% longer than the space allowed. In order for us to work on this together, I need first a revision to bring it within the 1,000 word limit. That's a significant cut, but on rereading you will see how it can be done. Then we can make the strong draft that is in here even stronger.

 

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