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 -- By TaylorMcGowan - 26 Feb 2010
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Starting Point: O'Bryan v. The Holy See

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 Given the disconnect between the jurisprudence underlying sovereign immunity and the Holy See’s ecclesial functions it should be plain to see that its status as a foreign sovereign is nothing more than, in the words of Thurman Arnold, a myth. But while questions about the Holy See’s status as a foreign sovereign have so far dominated discussion, the real concern should be seeking justice for those who were harmed by the Church’s silence.
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>		I printed out your paper and made minor grammar/structural notes there, as well as sketched out some of your bigger concepts. I wanted to do the same thing as the person who edited my paper, which was to give you a general reflection/reaction paragraph that can be saved in the wiki's history before I make my changes (probably tomorrow). I liked (and agree with) your main points, although I must confess that I knew nothing (at all) about the Holy See or the political structure of the Catholic Church. For this reason, I may play with the organization of your argument, so as to explain a bit more of the historical/political context (like how the See operates) before diving into "Why Sovereign Immunity Makes a Difference." I do not think it will be hard to maintain your voice, as you write very clearly. I will try to tighten up a few of the long-winded sentences (I am a pretty big offender in my own writing, but it's always easier to spot it in someone else's) but overall, I think you did an excellent job.
 
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