Law in the Internet Society

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 Brian, thank you for your note. I would rather receive many comments than revising on my own at this point.

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Ando,

Thank you for your essay. I appreciated that you included descriptions of real world experiences. That gave the paper a welcome flavor.

If I were to offer a suggestion, it would be that you consider revising section III a bit. In the first paragraph of Section III, I was confused by the sudden mention of Google Books. It seemed to appear suddenly in the discussion of internet search. I also think that it would be helpful if you suggested even a brief answer to the important question you conclude with. It is an important question to ask and for the same reasons it is an important question to answer.

I hope these comments are helpful.

-- BrianS - 03 Dec 2009

 
 
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