Cloudy With a Chance of Eyeballs: Consequences at the Seams of Cross-Border Data Sharing

I'd like to expand on the analytical content of this paper and clarify/hone the thesis. However, I found it difficult to make room for this material given the amount of background info I felt the need to cover. Ideally I would like to go more in-depth with an APA/ad law scrutiny of CLOUD's delegation and offer a more concrete (or at least more expansively explained) basis for my concerns about jurisdictional reach given CLOUD's placement/language in the SCA. But such arguments in isolation, I fear, would lack essential context for a reader who isn't familiar with CLOUD/SCA, MLATs & the existing procedures for authorized data sharing, and possibly the procedural history with Microsoft v. US. Where might I be able to cut summary content to make room for subjective/original material?