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Fantastic Machines and How to Use Them

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 A new opportunity has presented itself: getting paid to sign over your data. The choice is yours. Is getting your Netflix subscription paid for worth welcoming Big Brother with open arms?
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One hard edit to tighten the writing is indicated. You use more words than necessary, mostly through overdecorating. I think 15% to 20% of the space can be gained back.

How can a price be established for the sale of personal information if the risks of harm from future disclosure must be borne by the subject. Without knowing what can be inferred or otherwise synthesized from what is disclosed, in relation to what else may be discovered or disclosed elsewhere, how can the seller determine the appropriate price? And how could such information about the future effects of information disclosure be acquired or estimated?

 
You are entitled to restrict access to your paper if you want to. But we all derive immense benefit from reading one another's work, and I hope you won't feel the need unless the subject matter is personal and its disclosure would be harmful or undesirable. To restrict access to your paper simply delete the "#" character on the next two lines:

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