Dear Brian, I would like to say that I really appreciate your thoughtful comments on my writing. There were three sentences that you pointed out. First, "It is not only because I have a financial friendly result of my career aptitude test". I think that I have to re-phrase it as "It is not only because I have a FINANCE friendly reuslt ON my career aptitude test". I was trying to say that "a FINANCE friendly result" was my result of the test. Second, "but they did know the rules of racing" should be "but they did NOT know the rules of racing". Your correction was very accurate. Third, "After being questioned these questions" has to be "After being questioned BY these questions". I think my writing certainly is going to be better if I make changes like the above. Thank you for your consideration.

-- KeeryongSong - 12 Dec 2009