If it is at the exit, there is no need to try to make it better, I suppose. I would correct the typo in the second heading, at any rate. And maybe the success is not getting the essay to the point where Ginsberg can be pastiched, but to figure out what the difference is between what he means and what you are using him to say.

At the exit - Reflections after heaving learned we're being watched

-- By KristofferRakner - 08 Dec 2016

Introduction

The Wikipedia-entry also quotes Edward Joseph Snowden: "Arguing that you don't care about the right to privacy because you have nothing to hide is no different than saying you don't care about free speech because you have nothing to say."

In my mind this quote is illustrative of an important point. There is an important connection between speech and autonomy when it comes to driving the collective human intellect forward. The freedom to speak to share ideas helps others build on these ideas to create, and share once more. True autonomy exists only when one can create free from influence and control of the speech to listen to when creating.

There is a sucker burn every minute, how about a genius?

At outset surveillance at the outset nothing more the being observed. Thus, the attitude that the privacy-battle is reserved for the few may be understandable. However, the detriment of surveillance may follow the collection of behavior that, more often than not, compliments the observation computers make of our swiping, clicking and typing. Warehousing of collected behavior itself does little damage and can be useful e.g. in criminal cases and economic studies into mass behavior, the later may in turn lead to solutions to a more efficient society.

The danger is that large amounts data can give corporations and governments the opportunity to deploy this data, not only to predict behavior, but also control future behavior by controlling what the future Newton is exposed to and incentivizing further connectivity. Under the Christmas tree this year a four year old may find Hello Barbie. Of course, no toy is a toy unless it is connected to the net.(5) This can generate useful features as the doll may remember what you said to it a week ago. The price for this is a simple trade of. The creator of Hello Barbie just need to put the recording of the four year old talking to the doll on the cloud, but only for two years.(6) Pluss you can trust the company to delete all identifying data, and not use it for tailored marketing, controlling behavior. Power to control behavior is rarely abused.

One may philosophize that uniform exposure to the same ideas produce uniform thinkers. This may lead to the Einsteins and Newtons being further apart. Instead of sitting outside being hit by an apple,(7) Newton may sit inside clicking update on his Apple.

The dramatic effect of being deprived of the next Newton maybe high, however the connectivity of youth and young adults may lead to a collective homogeneity of thinkers. This may in turn lead the public as a whole to become docile, allowing the agenda to be set by a presidential Twitter-feed. I imagine this is why Snowden is warning about indifference to privacy.

Conclusion - Slaughtering Howl

I saw the best minds of my generation destroyed by madness, starving hysterical naked, dragging themselves through the Facebook-feed at dawn looking for an angry fix, angelheaded hipsters burning for the ancient heavenly connection to Snapchat in the machinery of night, who poverty and tatters and hollow-eyed sat up Tweeting in the supernatural darkness of cold-water flats floating across the tops of cities contemplating jazz, ...

Luckily, “Die Gedanken sind frei” and the average person can exercise his or her fundamental right to vote for political leaders free from covert targeted influence and control.(8)

Notes

2 : https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Nothing_to_hide_argument

3 : See Id., citing Solove, Daniel J. "Why Privacy Matters Even if You Have 'Nothing to Hide'." The Chronicle of Higher Education. May 15, 2011, http://www.chronicle.com/article/Why-Privacy-Matters-Even-if/127461/.

4 : Timothy Egan, The Eight-Second Attention Span, January 22, 2016, The New York Times http://www.nytimes.com/2016/01/22/opinion/the-eight-second-attention-span.html

5 : Geoffrey A. Fowler, Talking Toys Are Getting Smarter: Should We Be Worried?, December 17, 2015, The Wall Street Journal http://www.wsj.com/articles/talking-toys-are-getting-smarter-should-we-be-worried-1450378215

6 : With parental access of course.

7 : Steve Connor, The core of truth behind Sir Isaac Newton's apple, January 17, 2010, The Independent, http://www.independent.co.uk/news/science/the-core-of-truth-behind-sir-isaac-newtons-apple-1870915.html