Law in the Internet Society

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 "Surveillance" in Wikipedia the Free Encyclopedia Retrieved December 20, 2012, from http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Surveillance
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>		 I don't understand the need for this hybrid system of links and footnotes. Is this in order to make it possible to use the Blue Book when you don't need it anymore? Talk about recycled ideas.....

I agree with the ideas expressed here, of course, seeing that wherever they are attributed here they are all expressed in the "Why Freedom of Thought Requires Free Media, and Why Free Media Require Free Software" talk given in Berlin last March, which I assigned as watching for you in October. I think you do a fine job expressing all of this succinctly. You are communicating the message clearly. But it would be an improvement to have you take the ideas further, not limiting yourself to staying within the previously-articulated bounds. For example, how do you propose that we should defend our privacy, on which you are in agreement that our freedom of thought depends? Maybe even, how do you propose to do something yourself to defend our privacy?

 
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