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I would appreciate comments on my paper from anyone willing to give them.
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 I edited based on your paper. Thanks for the thoughtful paper. It was fun to read. Also, thanks for the comment box.

-- StevenWu - 19 Nov 2009

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I thought the analysis was good, Steven. You might wish to consider adding some hyperlinked text for some additional factual support. For example, you could add statistics on MMORPGs demonstrating your claim that subscription-based games are preferred over free games. Or link to reports on AdBlock? for section III. I feel confident you already know this, but the earth/chain icon in the edit screen creates the external link formatting just in case.

One other thought I had was that a fifth strategy is giving goods for free with donation encouragements. Or maybe this ties in with your discussion in section II.1.

It was a smooth read. I would welcome your thoughts on my essay if you are so-inclined.

-- BrianS - 19 Nov 2009

 
 
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